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Invisible

Bulert wrote on 8/15/2006 4:03:17 PM :

She stands at her locker, hiding behind the door

Hoping if she doesn???t look up nobody will notice

That she isn???t there, maybe if she thinks she is invisible

One day she will be, as invisible as they make her feel

 

She is the girl in your school who always walks

Eyes at the floor, head down in shame

She has been left with no dignity

There are purple bruises on her ego

 

Every class is another room of hell

Each student is another tormenter

Every bus ride is dreaded throughout the day

And getting up to go back is like walking to your own hanging

 

Sure, nobody really knows how she feels

She knows nobody would never care

Sometimes she wonders seriously.

If i disapeared..would they notice i'm not there?

 

Not a very good one..but irts my newestBig Smile [:D]

oneandonly wrote on 8/15/2006 8:00:30 PM :
welcome to my world !
Bulert wrote on 8/15/2006 8:15:14 PM :
I hear ya!
willie c wuddle wrote on 8/15/2006 8:20:45 PM :
You talk about being invisable. Eye can't see that.
Bulert wrote on 8/15/2006 8:22:41 PM :
oh nice punStick out tongue [:P]
willie c wuddle wrote on 8/15/2006 8:36:11 PM :
Your poem kind of reminds me of grade eight and nine.Sad [:(]
Bulert wrote on 8/15/2006 8:43:19 PM :
Why?
willie c wuddle wrote on 8/15/2006 9:17:45 PM :

Same story....different generation.

Bulert wrote on 8/15/2006 9:31:51 PM :
I wrote is about a friend..
joel27 wrote on 8/16/2006 8:57:58 AM :
very good poem great piece of work
Bulert wrote on 8/16/2006 9:06:13 AM :
aww thanks joel